My #FirstPictureBook Q&A

Making a list and checking it twice . . .

December 4, 2017

Tags: Tara Lazar, Tracy Marchini, Marie Lamba, Rebecca Grabill, Josh Funk, Sylvia Liu, Chana Stiefel, Lauri Fortino, Jami Gigot, Deborah Freedman, Katey Howes

Santaís not the only one who likes a good list. Below are links to lists from 11 picture-book authorsófrom ď500 Things That Kids LikeĒ and ď7 Steps to Writing SuccessĒ to ď18 Ideas for a Successful Book LaunchĒ and ď10 Reasonís Iím Thankful for Childrenís BooksĒ. Iím grateful that these writers have contributed to my Q&A blog (click on authorís name above to read their #firstpicturebook interview) and that the KidLit community is so generous with their advice and support. Happy Writing and Happy Holidays! See you in 2018!

Tara Lazarís List of 500 Things That Kids Like

Tracy Marchiniís How Can You Tell If Youíre Using Picture-Book Language

Marie Lambaís 7 Steps to Writing Success

Rebecca Grabillís How to Promote Your First Picture Book

Josh Funkís Marketing Strategies

Sylvia Liuís 18 Ideas for a Successful Book Launch

Chana Steifelís 5 Writing Lessons I Learned from an Ironwoman

Lauri Fortinoís Tending Your Story Garden

Jami Gigotís Creating Picture Books As An Author/Illustrator

Deborah Freedmanís Resources for Writers and Illustrators of Picture Books

Katey Howesí 10 Reasonís Iím Thankful for Childrenís Books:

THE PEDDLER'S BED

July 11, 2016

Tags: THE PEDDLER'S BED, Lauri Fortino, Bong Redila, Ripple Grove Press, 2015

Library Assistant Lauri Fortino is a strong supporter of library and literacy initiatives and the creator of Frog On A Blog, a forum for writers and fans of childrenís picture books to share their views on all-things picture books. But today she shares the story of how she created her first picture book, THE PEDDLER'S BEDó"a quirky little tale that expresses the core message of kindness and hospitality, sharing what you have with others, no matter how humble or how fine" (Midwest Book Review).

Q. Was THE PEDDLER'S BED the first picture book manuscript you ever wrote? If not, what was the first picture book you wrote and what happened to it?
A. I have written several picture book manuscripts, both before and after The Peddlerís Bed. My first picture book story was called Freddy Bear Goes Here and There, which I completed while taking a childrenís writerís course back in 2005. The story has gone through several revisions and title changes (and rejections) since then. I just recently dug it out again for even more revisions. Itís barely recognizable now as the story I wrote over ten years ago.

Q. What inspired†THE PEDDLER'S BED?
A. My inspiration for THE PEDDLERíS BED came from a sense of gratitude I felt toward family and friends for their generosity. When my husband and I first got married, much of our furniture was given to us, including our bed. The story is all about kindness and generosity and I really feel the world could use more of both.

Q. How did you pick the title of your book?
A. The title just came to me when I knew the story was going to be about a peddler who tries to sell a bed. The title for The peddlerís bed never changed.

Q. What is your favorite part of the book? And was that part in the first draft?
A. My favorite part is the little manís dog Happy. He was in the story from the beginning. Iím pretty sure my dog influenced my decision to include a canine companion in the book.

Q. Why did you decide to tell the story in third person?
A. At the time, I was writing all of my stories in third person and hadnít considered anything else. Iíve become more comfortable experimenting with different points of view now. Iím even working on a story that breaks the fourth wall.

Q. How much of the story did you know when you began writing†THE PEDDLER'S BED?
A. I had a rough idea of what the story was about, how it would begin, and how I wanted it to end. But my plot was disjointed. I had to work on connecting the dots from beginning to end in a way that made sense.

Q. Did†THE PEDDLER'S BED†receive any rejection letters? If so, how many (ballpark)?
A. Before sending the manuscript to Ripple Grove Press, I had sent it out only twice, and received back two rejections.

Q. Describe your reaction when you received an offer on†THE PEDDLER'S BED.
A. There was a message on my answering machine when I arrived home from work (I work at my local public library) from Rob Broder, president and founder of Ripple Grove Press, saying heís interested in THE PEDDLERíS BED and to call him to discuss a possible contract. Well, I must have replayed the message at least four or five times to be sure I was hearing correctly. Needless to say, I was thrilled!

Q. What kind of input did you have in choosing an illustrator for the book?
A. Rob and I discussed illustration style and he asked me to name a few books with styles that I thought were a good fit for the story. We seemed to be in agreement about what direction to take the art. Then Rob contacted Bong Redila to see if heíd be interested in illustrating the book. Iím super pleased with Bongís illustrations. Theyíre so colorful and unique.

Q. What jumped out at you when you saw the first sketches and jacket cover?
A. The first thing that jumped out at me was that the peddlerís cart looked very different from what I had envisioned. But that was perfectly okay. I loved the sketches! Itís fascinating to see how an illustrator takes your words and ideas and brings them to life.

Q. How long did†THE PEDDLER'S BED†take to be publishedófrom the time you received an offer until it was printed?
A. I signed the contract October 31, 2013 and the publication date was September 1, 2015, so nearly two years. But I received my author copies in April of 2015.

Q. Is there anything you would change in the book today if you could reprint it? (Was there a part that you really loved but had to edit out? Or did you think of something later that you wanted to add?)
A. Iím sure thereíd be a lot of things Iíd change if I picked it apart, but I try not to do that. As writers, our inner editors are always talking, making us believe what weíve written isnít ready, finished, or good enough. Sometimes you just have to put him/her on mute and let it go.

Q. Can you share any funny or memorable parts of letters from kids about†THE PEDDLER'S BED?
A. This isnít from letters, but from talking to the kids about the book after Iíve read it. The book ends with the little man asleep on the bed on his front porch. I like to ask the kids how they think the little man will get the bed inside the house. One child said heíd prop open the roof and lower it down. You canít beat the ingenuity of kids.

Q. When you do readings of†THE PEDDLER'S BED†which part of the book gets the best reaction?
A. What gets the best reaction actually happens before I read the book. Because there is a dog in the story, I like to share a picture of my dog with the kids. I show them a blown up picture of my dog with crazy, static-zapped, fly-away hair and tell the kids he was having a bad hair day. They love it!

Q. What is your #1 tip to those who want to write picture books?
A. Read bunches of picture books, especially new ones! Go to the library and raid their New Picture Book shelves. If you want to get published the traditional way, itís important to really get a feel for the format and a clearer picture of what publishers are publishing and whatís selling in the current market. That said, donít try to copy what others have done. Create something new. Write the stories that only you can write.

Q. What are you working on now?
A. Iím working on several picture book manuscripts as well as a childrenís chapter book. My goal this year is to find a literary agent to represent my work.
To learn more about Lauri, visit her website